When Panic Leads to Progress - A Teacher's Journey with AI and Authentic Assessment
- Leslie Spurrier
- Sep 7
- 5 min read

The Moment Everything Changed
Picture this: It's February, the second quarter of the school year, and I'm grading what should be a straightforward reading response assignment. Opening up the assignment for one of my students, I being reading, and almost immediately something feels... off. The writing is smoother than usual, the verbs strong and more sophisticated than usual, and there's a uniformity that makes my teacher spidey-senses tingle.
Welcome to teaching in the age of AI, where our gut instincts about student work have become both more important and more complicated than ever.
Like many of you, I've been trying to think through how to get around the unhinged, unguarded world of AI use in my classroom. And while I fully admit I don't have it figured out, I decided to get proactive.
The Baseline Writing Sample Solution
My first line of defense came at the beginning of this school year; I needed to see what my students' authentic writing actually looked like. So I gave them an article to read and asked them to respond - but here's the key - they had to write their responses by hand, in class, with no technology access.

Was it a bit sneaky? Maybe. Did they hate? That's a strong "yes," but it gave me exactly what I
needed: genuine writing samples that I could refer back to throughout the year if questions arose. Think of it as creating a "writing fingerprint" for each student.
The responses were beautifully imperfect - full of crossed-out words, run-on sentences, and those wonderfully authentic thoughts that meander before finding their point. It was exactly what I needed to see.
A Really Good Question
Enter my colleague Lydia (shoutout to her for asking the right question at the right time). She stopped by my classroom and asked, "Are you planning to give them formal feedback on these writing samples?"
And there it was - the question that stopped me in my tracks. I had been so focused on creating a comparison tool that I hadn't considered the learning opportunity right in front of me. These weren't just samples to file away; they were starting points for growth.
Birth of the Writing Evaluation Checklist
That night, I sat down and reflected on the most common writing needs I've observed over my years of teaching. You know the patterns: students who write amazing ideas but struggle with organization, others who have perfect grammar but need help developing their thoughts, and those who can tell a story verbally but freeze up when it comes to putting it on paper.
I created a checklist that addresses these core areas:
Theme + Focus: Is there a unifying idea with a purpose and point to the writing?
Evidence + Analysis: Does the writing include text evidence, examples, and original commentary?
Organization + Structure: Is there a logical progression of ideas signaled by transitions?
Style + Voice: Does the writer have a distinct, authentic voice and communicate it through word choice, syntax, and creativity?
Grammar + Conventions: Is there a firm grasp of basic conventions or do repeated mistakes take away from the reading?
But here's what makes this checklist different - it's completely customizable. I started with baseline skills I want my students to work on/master right off the bat. I tailored it for "Quarter 1" and plan on revisiting it in the next quarter in order to gauge learning and plot growth. Depending on what you're focusing on in your classroom, you can add, remove, or modify categories to match your specific writing goals.
Turning Assessment into Empowerment
Instead of just using the checklist as a grading tool, I decided to flip the script entirely. I gave the checklist to my students along with feedback on their baseline writing samples. Then came the magic moment: I asked them to choose three areas from the checklist to focus on during the first quarter. Yep, they got to decide what they were going to learn.
The conversations that followed were incredible. Students were analyzing their own writing, identifying patterns in their strengths and challenges, and most importantly, taking ownership of their growth. One student realized she had amazing ideas but needed help with transitions. Another discovered that while his grammar was solid, he wasn't taking enough risks with word choice.
From there, each student then wrote out a detailed plan for how they would work on their chosen focus areas. These plans weren't generic - they were specific, personal, and actionable. One student decided to keep a "transition phrase bank" in her notebook. Another committed to trying one new vocabulary word in each writing assignment.
Everything - the original writing sample, the completed checklist, and their improvement plans - went into their writing portfolios. These portfolios have become living documents that we will reference throughout the quarter.
What I'm Learning So Far
We're only a few weeks into this experiment, but I'm already seeing promising results:
Student ownership has increased dramatically. They're referring to their focus areas without prompting and asking for specific feedback.
Peer feedback has become more constructive. When students know what they're working on, they can offer and receive more targeted help.
My feedback has become more efficient. Instead of trying to address everything in every piece of writing, I can focus on their chosen areas plus one or two other observations.
Students are taking more risks. When they know what they're practicing, they're more willing to try new techniques.
The Resource for You
Because this process has been so powerful in my classroom, I've turned it into a resource that you can customize for your students. The Writing Focus Areas Checklist comes with a customizable master checklist (editable so you can adapt it to your specific goals) and a student reflection sheet that includes sentence starters geared toward helping them think through a practical plan. Best of all? This resource is FREE on my Teachers Pay Teachers store.
Why This Matters Beyond AI
While this tool was born from my concerns about AI use, it's become something much bigger. It's helping students develop metacognitive skills about their writing process. They're learning to self-assess, set goals, and monitor their progress - skills that will serve them far beyond school. In our current educational landscape, where technology is changing how students interact with writing, teaching them to understand and improve their authentic voice has never been more important.
The Beautiful Messiness of Teaching
Looking back, I'm grateful for that initial panic about AI. It pushed me to create something that's genuinely helping my students grow as writers and thinkers. Sometimes our most vulnerable teaching moments - the ones where we feel like we're scrambling to keep up - lead to our most meaningful breakthroughs.
That's what teaching is, isn't it? A beautiful dance between planning and adapting, between our expertise and our willingness to learn alongside our students.
What challenges in your classroom have led to unexpected solutions? I'd love to hear about your own moments of panic-turned-progress in the comments below.
Happy teaching, friends! 📝✨
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